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| Smellum |
  Posted 7th Aug 2005 1:14pm |
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I'm bored, so i thought i might aswell make one of these. im new, so dont flame me (thats right, im immune). ill start you people off.
It's been 200 years since the events of the first Red Faction. The Red Faction have been in power for this whole time, and have remained unchallenged in there governmental threshold. the human limits of technolgy are reeching further than ever imagined. There have been a few trips out of the galaxy, but only into deep space. But there was one trip that showed something completely new. A new alien race is heading towards the galaxy, and they are in no way or means peaceful... |
| See the smellum. Hear the smellum. Smell the smellum. |
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| goober |
Posted 7th Aug 2005 1:17pm |  |
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they go to the ultor mines and kill ultor then the miners go home, by mistake, take one of these aliens back to earth, it takes over Florida, Cape Kenedy, spreading to texas
it takes NASA and sends unauthorized ships to mars to pick up the rest of these aliens, they come to earth, take over north america, everyone from north america is whiped out, they find bush's stash of like a million ICBMS, fires one at austrailia, then one at china, all thats left is africa and europe.
someone else take it from there  |
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| KERPAL |
Posted 8th Aug 2005 8:25am | |
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goober, I think you kind of went off topic lol  |
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| DVL-Blaze |
Posted 8th Aug 2005 6:30pm |
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| Quoting Smellum | I'm bored, so i thought i might aswell make one of these. im new, so dont flame me (thats right, im immune). ill start you people off.
It's been 200 years since the events of the first Red Faction. The Red Faction have been in power for this whole time, and have remained unchallenged in there governmental threshold. the human limits of technolgy are reeching further than ever imagined. There have been a few trips out of the galaxy, but only into deep space. But there was one trip that showed something completely new. A new alien race is heading towards the galaxy, and they are in no way or means peaceful... |
Chriss Kline, leading professor of the Red Faction, was astonished at what he had found. The structures, the technological achievments this race had accomplished were un-measurable by any one of our thoughts. Building that litterally scraped the sky and broke threw the clouds like fingers dipping thmselves in merky water. Chriss and the rest of the crew decided to land near a secluded area as to not provoke the species into attack, for they had learned from what happened last time and Grazex 9. There was a loude screech and then a subtle hissing. It was the ships rear entry opening.
"Alright team lets head out and take a look around. Remember if ya seperate from the group and get into trouble use your flares."Parker spoke with a somewhat under whelming voice. He shifted his head ever so slightly and our eyes met. "You ready rookie? cuz if u ain't u can just stay here and make sure that no one steals our ship or our porn."He smirked and he went towards the dim, dusty outerworld. I had no choice. If i wanted to be respected by the rest i had to do this. How difficult could it be?Just go outside look around and be back. Wouldn't be more than ten minutes tops. Just then a huge shadow emrged from behind me and the dimness that shimmered into the ship became a blinding, heavenly glare!" |
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| Smellum |
Posted 9th Aug 2005 4:17am |
Welcome!
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I'll continue, for the sake of keeping this alive:
"Holy s***, what the hell is that!" parker shouted, and others were pointing. A strange sort of ship came up and revealed itself to them. It was a dim purple colour, with protruding spikes as wings. As it flew it seemed to lick up the sand on the ground. Then the ship started to light up at the front. Two large balls(haha i have a sick mind) of energy started up. "Maybe we should ru..". The rest of his words were cut off as he was hit by one of the energy masses. Then i started to run. But one of the energy shots was coming straight at me... |
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| DVL-Blaze |
Posted 12th Aug 2005 7:36pm |
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I fell face first into the dusty, dead terrain. I could only imagine what was to be of me i a short time.
I quickly rolled over as if i were planning to adefend myself but i knew there was no chance. I reached into my chest pocket and held tightly to the note Laura had given me before I left the base. What would become of her if i were no longer breathing? Would she care?would she move on?would she join the faction and try to avenge my death and lose her life in the war? I had become dilerious,paranoid, anxious, and frightened during these few seconds.
The blinding energy mass was coming in quicker and quicker but in all the comotion i had become completely oblivious to my surroundings. To my left was a massive crack in the moutain and to my right were miles upon miles of dust and what appeared to be vehicles of some type of assault team. The crack was only about 50 metres down and i'd have about a 73% chance of living. I took my chance asn quickly got up to my feet but my movement was sluggish to say the least.
I dove off the ledge hoping that the massive weapon to my backside wouldn't engulf me in it's power or render me unconious as i fell.
The floor of the crack wasn't as i expected.The surface was smoothed and polished unlike the surfaces back on Mars. This made the fall more comfortable even though i still had sprang my left ankle and left wrist. The smash i heard as i fell suggested that no one was left living except for that...that thing that attacked us. It was like half machine have beast.
"S***! They're gone....they're all gone! I gotta find a way outta here!" I spoke to myself to try to keep calm. Or perhaps it was becuase the previous events had sent me into a state of insanity. Whatever the case was i had to try and contact the base back on mars which would be difficult because of all the variables and un answered questions.
How long would it take to get to the enarest comms center?Would I survive that long?Was this planet a vicous race like Qatore or was it a planet of law and understanding like Vughoir? There was no way of knowing anything any more but my only way of answer any of those were to get moving. I rose to my feet and reached into my pocket.I rummaged around furiously but alas I knew i had lost the note back on the moutain top.I had lost the only thing to remind me of the one i love.Sure i remember the note but without actually seeing what she had written it was just another thought that would never be fullfilled.
Just then two bright lights appeared in the distance and were enclosing on me quickly.There was a silhouette of someone or something on the top of the lights.It must have been something like a jeep that was appraoching me.
"Zuv tas lad Muy xarrr Oigash!" the voice screamed with a robotic reptilian nature.
I stood still and awaited what fate had planned for me...
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